Sunday, May 23, 2010

RESEARCH

SANDRA FRANKLIN

- SANDRA WAS ONTRIAL FOR STABBING HER HUSBAND DR.PETER FRANKLIN

- SHE MURDERED HER HUSBAND BECAUSE SHE BELIEVED HE WAS HAVING AN AFFAIR

- SANDRA FRANKLIN TRIED TO LIE AND SAY THAT SHE KILLED HIM IN SELF-DEFENSE

- SHE WAS FOUND GUILTY OF MURDERING HER HUSBANDS AND RECIEVED A LIFE SENTENCE


SUSAN "SADIE MAY GLUTZ" ATKINS

- SUSAN STABBED ACTRESS SHARON TATE

- SUSAN SWORE BEFORE A GRAND JURY THAT CHARLIE MANSON TOLD HER TO STAB SHARON TATE

- SHE SAID THAT SHE WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR MANSON AND SHE BELIEVED HE WAS JESUS

- SUSAN WAS A FORMER FAMILY MEMBER OF THE MANSON FAMILY

- SUSAN ATKINS PARTICAPATED IN THE MURDER OF A MUSIC TEACHER NAMED GARY HINMAN

SAMPLE CHAPTER-MURDER IN MANHATTAN

"PLEASE DON'T SHOOT, JUST DON'T SHOOT" A YOUNG WOMEN CRIED. "ALL THREE OF YOU FACE THE WALL AND PUT YOUR HANDS ON YOUR HEAD. NOW!" "OKAY, OKAY JUST DONT SHOOT!" BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!

"GOOD MORNING EVERYONE" DETECTIVE KATE BECKET SAID AS SHE WALKED INTO THE STATION. "MORNING" HER CO-WORKERS REPLIED. "KATE I NEED TO SEE YOU IN MY OFFICE." "WHAT DO YOU NEED TO TELL ME SIR?" WELL I KNOW YOU MAY NOT BE HAPPY ABOUT THIS BUT HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF A BOOK WRITER NAMED RICHARD CASTLE? YEAH, WHY? I JUST RECIEVED A CALL FROM THE MAYOR TO INFORM ME THAT HE WILL BE WORKING WITH YOU TO HELP YOU SOLVE MURDER CASES TO WRITE HIS NEW BOOK. WAIT WHAT?! SIR YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS. I'M SORRY BECKET BUT ITS THE MAYOR'S ORDERS.WELL WOULD YOU LOOK AT THAT HERE HE IS RIGHT ON TIME.
BECKET MEET CASLTE, CASTLE MEET BECKET. OKAY NOW THAT WE ALL KNOW EACHOTHER THERE'S BEEN THREE MURDERS IN DOWNTOWN MANHATTAN LAST NIGHT.
I'M ON MY WAY SIR. BECKET AREN'T YOU FORGETTING SOMETHING. FINE BUT IF I ACCIDENTALLY SHOOT HIM BECAUSE I'VE MISTAKEN HIM FOR A SUSPECT ITS NOT MY FAULT.HAVE FUN YOU TWO!

" WHO ARE OUR VICTIMS?" ASKED KATE. IT SEEMS WE HAVE TWO MALE AND ONE FEMALE VICTIM ALL THREE SHOT IN THE HEAD ONE TIME BETWEEN THEIR EYES IN THE MIDDLE OF THEIR FOREHEADS. REPLIED THE CORONER" IT LOOKS LIKE THEY WERE KILLED BETWEEN 10 AND 12 PM." "CAN YOU DETERMINE THE MURDER WEAPON? IT LOOKS LIKE A SILENCER BECAUSE THERE WERE NO WITNESSES AND NOBODY HEARD ANYTHING. OKAY HAVE YOU IDENTIFIED THE BODIES YET? NO,BUT WE ARE GOING TO LOOK INTO ANY MISSING PERSONS CASES IN OUR SYSTEM. DO WE HAVE ANY FINERPRINTS, HAIRS SAMPLES OR ANYHTHING AT ALL? NO BUT WE ARE WORKING ON IT I'LL GET YOU THE INFORMATION AS SOON AS I GET THE INFORMATION I WILL GIVE TO YOU IMMEDIATELY. WHEN CAN I EXPECT THE DNA RESULTS? IN ABOUT TWO HOURS AT THE MOST. OKAY, THANKS.

"CASTLE!" DETECTIVE BECKET CALLED OUT. "YES" CASTLE REPLIED. SO WHAT DID YOU DO PAY THE MAYOR TO FORCE ME TO WORK WITH YOU? NO, WE'RE JUST CLOSE FRIENDS AND HE WAS DOING ME FAVOR, THAT'S ALL. SO HOW ARE YOU WRITING YOUR BOOK? IN SHORT STORIES, CHAPTERS, ETC, ETC, ETC. I'M WRITING MY BOOK IN SHORT STORIES. OKAY.

"SO KATE TELL ME ABOUT YOURSELF." CASTLE SAID " WHAT DO YOU NEED TO KNOW ABOUT ME? ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE SURE I'M NOT A SERIAL KILLER?" REPLIED KATE. " NO I JUST THINK WE SHOULD GET TO KNOW EACHOTHER. I MEAN WE ARE GOING TO BE WORKING WITH EACHOTHER FOR A WHILE BOOKS JUST AREN'T WRITTEN OVER NIGHT YOU KNOW." "YES I KNOW THAT AND I LIKE TO KEEP MY PERSONAL LIFE SEPERATELY FROM MY WORK LIFE." KATE SAID ANGRILY.




























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































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Thursday, May 20, 2010

DRAMATIC PLOT OUTLINE

I. INTRODUCTION
A.THE SETTING OF MY STORY IS ABOUT A AMN WHO MURDERED THREE PEOPLE EXSECUTION STYLE.THE STORY TAKES PLACE IN A DARK ALLEY IN MANHATTAN DURING THE NIGHT ARPOUND ELEVEN P.M.
B.THE MAIN CHARACTERS IN MY STORY ARE KATE BECKET AND RICHARD CASTLE.
II. RISING ACTION
A.THE MAIN CHARACTERS OF MY STORY KATE AND CASTLE ARE INVESTIGATING A MURDER AFTER JUST MEETING EACHOTHER AND FINDING OUT THAT THEY WILL BE WORKING TOGETHER.
B.THE MAIN CHARACTERS WANT TO FIND THE KILLER OF THE THREE VICTIMS. KATE AND CASTLE WANT TO FIND THE MURDERER BECUASE IT IS THEIR JOBS.KATE AND CASTLE CARE ABOUT THEIR FAMILY MEMBERS THEIR FRIENDS THEIR CO-WORKERS AND THE FAMILIES OF THE MURDER VICTIMS.
III.CLIMAX
A.KATE AND CASTLE GETS A LEAD ON THE MURDER SUSPECT AND GOES TO HIS HOUSE TO ASK HIM SOME QUESTIONS. WHEN THEY ARRIVE AT HIS HOUSE SHE TELLS CASTLE TO STAY IN THE CAR AND HAND CUFFS HIM TO THE HANDLE TO MAKE SURE HE DOESNT LEAVE. KATE GOES INSIDE TO ASK THE SUSPECT SOME QUESTIONS. SHE REALIZES THAT HE WAS LYING ABOUT HIS ALIBI AND TRIES TO ARREST HIM BUT HE STARTS SHOOTING AND WHEN CASTLE HEARS THE GUN SHOTS HE BREAKS THE CUFFS AND GETS IN THE HOUSE DISTRACTS KATE AND THE SUSPECT GETS AWAY.
B. KATE AND CASTLE TRY TO FIGURE OUT WHERE THE SUSPECT MIGHT HAVE WENT OR WHERE HE WILL GO.
IV. FALLING ACTION
A.KATE AND CASTLE GO TO THE AIRPORT AND PUT THE SUSPECT IN THE NO FLY LIST.THEY TALK TO ALL HIS FAMILY AND FRIENDS SEARCH THEIR HOUSES TO SEE IF HE MIGHT BE TRYING TO HIDE THERE. THEY ALSO ASK HIS FAMILY AND FRIENDS IF THEY HAVE ANY IDEA OF WHERE HE MIGHT BE OR IF THEY HAVE HAD ANY CONTACT WITH HIM.WHILE ASKING ONE OF THE FAMILY MEMBERS QUESTIONS THEY ASK KATE AND CASTLE IF THEY WERE A COUPLE AND THEY SAID NO THEY DONT EVEN LIKE EACHOTHER.
B. THE MAIN CHARACTERS INDIVIDUALLY BEGIN TO REALIZE THEY HAVE ALOT IN COMMON AND THAT MAYBE THEY DO LIKE EACHOTHER BUT THEY KEEP IT TO THEMSELVES AND TRY TO DENY IT.
V.RESOLUTION
A.THE MAIN CHARACTERS HAVE CAUGHT THE KILLER ARREST HIM AND PUT HIM IN JAIL.
B.THE MAIN CHARACTERS ARE NOW GOING TO ADMITT TO EACHOTHER HOW THEY FEEL. NEXT THEY ARE GOING TO CONTINUE SOLVING CASES TOGETHER UNTIL CASTLE CAN FINISH HIS BOOK AND THEY WILL START DATING.

CHARACTER BIOGRAPHY-RICHARD CASTLE

RICHARD CASTLE WAS BORN IN CHICAGO AND RAISED IN MANHATTAN. HIS MOTHER WAS AN ACTRESS ON BROADWAY, SHE HAD DONE MANY PLAYS AND WAS FAMOUS FOR HER PERFORMANCES. RICHARD AND HIS MOTHER LIVED IN A MEDIUM SIZED APARTMENT.RICHARD ONLY KNEW HIS FATHER UNTIL HE WAS THREE YEARS OLD BECUASE HE WANTED TO EXPLORE THE WORLD AND PROMISED HE WOULD COME BACK BUT INSTEAD HE JUST DISAPPEARED NEVER TO BE HEARD FROM AGAIN. MOST OF RICHARD'S FRIENDS AT SCHOOL CALLED HIM CASTLE SO EVER SINCE THEN HE JUST WENT BY THE NAME CASLTE. CASTLE DIDN'T HAVE THE BEST GRADES IN SCHOOL EXCEPT FOR ENGLISH CLASS. HE WROTE THE BEST STORIES IN HIS SCHOOL HE WON WRITING COMPETITIONS AND ALSO WON MONEY FOR THEM. HE WROTE HIS STORIES ABOUT FICTIONAL MURDER STORIES UNTIL ONE DAY HE TRIED WRITING ABOUT NON-FICTIONAL MURDER STORIES AND WHEN HE READ IT ALOUD TO HIS CLASS HE REALIZED THAT THEY SEEMED MORE INTERESTED IN THE STORY. AT AGE 12 HE DECIDED THAT HE WANTED TO BECOME A NON-FICTION BOOK WRITER ABOUT MURDER STORIES.AFTER GRADUATING FROM COLLEGE HE FELL IN LOVE AND HAD A DAUGHTER. WHEN HIS DAUGHTER WAS 4 YAERS OLD CASTLE AND HIS WIFE GOT A DIVORCE. AFTER A LONG DIVORCE AND A EXHAUSTING CUSTODY BATTLE RIACHARD CASTLE A FAMOUS BOOK WRITER WAS OFFERED A JOB TO WORK WITH AN ACTUAL MURDER INVESTIGATOR TO WRITE ANOTHER BOOK BASED ON THE MURDERS.

CHARACTER BIOGRAPHY-DETECTIVE KATE BECKET

DETECTIVE KATE BECKET WAS BORN AND RAISED IN BROOKLYN, NEW YORK. SHE WAS AN ONLY CHILD AND LIVED IN A CONDOMINIUM WITH HER MOM.KATE'S MOTHER WAS A FAMOUS MYSTERY WRITER. HER BOOKS WERE ABOUT TRUE MURDER STORIES.KATE ALWAYS DID VERY WELL IN SCHOOL AND WANTED TO BE JUST LIKE HER MOTHER. HER FATHER LEFT HER WHEN SHE WAS BORN BECAUSE HE SAID THAT SHE WASN'T HIS BECUASE HE BELIEVED THAT HER MOTHER HAD CHEATED ON HIM SO SHE NEVER SAW HIM AND DIDNT EVEN KNOW HIS NAME.KATE AND MOTHER WORE A DISGUISE WHENEVER SHE WAS IN THE PUBLIC EYE BECAUSE WHEN SHE GOT OLDER SHE DIDNT WANT TO BE KNOWN FOR WHO HER MOTHER WAS.AT THE AGE OF 15 KATE DECIDED SHE WANTED TO BE A DETECTIVE SO SHE COULD SOLVE MURDERS JUST LIKE THE ONES HER MOTHER WROTE IN HER BOOKS. KATE TRAINED FOR YEARS STUDYING FORENSIC EVIDENCE AND HUMAN BODY LANGUAGE AND WHEN SHE BECAME 24 SHE WAS READY TO BECOME A DETECTIVE. AFTER SOLVING SEVERAL MURDERS IN ONE YEAR SHE HAD FOUND OUT THAT ONE OF HER MOTHER'S FANS TOOK HER ONE OF HER BOOKS TOO SERIOUSLY AND KILLED HER JUST LIKE THE WAY A VICTIM WAS MURDERED IN ONE OF HER STORIES. SHE SPENT THREE YEARS INVESTIGATING HER MOTHER'S MURDER BUT WAS UNSUCCESSFUL. SHE BEGAN GETTING HER LIFE BACK ON TRACK AND WAS MOVED TO A NEW STATION WHERE THE PEOPLE SHE WORKED WITH BECAME FAMILY.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Is Byron a Juvenile Delinquent?

I think Byron Watson is a juvenile

Friday, November 20, 2009

the watsons go to birmingham the quiz

1 It was so cold on Saturday, the Watsons sat huddled together under the banket on the couch.


2. Momma felt the cold the most because she was from Alabama


3. Kenny and his family lived in Flint, Michigan.


4. Joetta was Kenny' s little sister.


5.According to Kenny , Byron tried to make Momma laugh all the time.


6.The weatherman said the temperature in Atlanta, Georgia, would reach the mid-seventies.


7.Dad told Kenny , Byron, and Joetta they were lucky not to be the children of one of Momma' s old boyfriends named (A) Hambone Henderson, (B) Lucky Henderson, (C) Clown Henderson


(A) Hambone Henderson


8. When she was about to laugh , Momma put her hand over her mouth because (A) she had several teeth missing, (B) had a big gap between her front teeth, (C) had a loud laugh